To myself


  Whatever the win or fail,but please remember never give up.
  How boring those days!A strange relax,I fell in a terrible sadness,I don't know why.
  Am I keeping the best?
  Maybe sometimes I feel tired,I fell in lonely.
  What's the matter with me?Am I too tired?I played a lot those days,but I'm not happy at all.
  'Because I haven't done anything,I'm sad.Is that so?'I ask myself times and times.
  Where and what is the answer?
  Maybe this times I will not be a winner.Am I afaird  of  it?I don't know.
  Sometimes I will be strange.
  What have you done,what will you have.
  ......
  Am I regret of what I have done?
  But I could never change my past......
  Now I feel better,thank you,Another Me.
同学说是chinglish，啊啊……
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有一点像。。。。。

而且有些动词的时态不对。。。。。

还有搭配不当，形式不对以及一些其它的错误吧。。。。。。。读起来怪怪的。。。。。。。

CH得很厉害好伐 我看第一句就这么感觉的,不过呢 这是出自一位这次12月要第一次考CET-6的小朋友的评价 是可信孰不可信

(*^__^*) 嘻嘻……
我的也经常犯错误，没办法啊，在中国，就是这样的

第一句连个主语都没有呢///省略也不能成这样吧。。。

  whether  you win or lose,but please remember to never give up.
  How bored is those days!A strange relief(this part doen't make sense),I felt terrible inside (get rid of saddness, it sounds weird),I don't know why(perfect sentence).
  Am I still the best?
  Maybe sometimes I felt tired,I felt lonely inside.
  What's the matter with me(换成what's wrong with me 也可以）?Am I too tired?I played alot （ALOT 不要分开写）those days,but I'm not happy at all.
  'Is this Because I haven't done anything,I'm sad.Is that so?'I ask myself a zillion times.
  Where and what is the answer?
  Maybe this time(only one time no "S"I'm not gonna won.Am I afaird  of  it?I don't know.
  Sometimes I will be strange(这里不知道怎么改doen't make any sense at all).
  What have you done,what will you have.
  ......
  Am I regret of what I have done?
  But I could never change my past(换成GO BACK IN TIME 比较好）......
I fell better now,thank you,the other Me

圣女MM记住 VERB+SUBJECT+ACTION
和 SIMPLE PAST, SIMPLE FUTURE,SIMPLE PRE PAST CON,PRE CON,FUTURE CON的用法和区别
中国学生能达到这种成度就不错了。 写的也很好